That's a decent looking start there, Ronin, but I'd say you need a bit more density of shape-obscuring flage for it to work well in anything but already pretty dense cover foliage. You could also do with some blocks of colour put together asymetrically, because what you have there is after all a pretty man shaped cover which is fairly homogeneous in its colour distribution. Also I would go for a veil if I were you. A veil that covers your head, with a bit of a lump that sticks out one side or the other, and comes down over your scope - that will allow you to plot up in front of foliage and, with a few bits of the foliage that is behind you plonked on top, so long as you stay still you'll be unnoticeable, which will give you a lot more options for where to shoot from.