'SLICE' short thriller

[Freshreel]

I recently Directed a short film, SLICE. I used a GBB I bought off this forum, and thought you guys might be interested in watching it!



let me know what you think, and how to improve it!

 

[kungfumonkey]

Looks ok only thing how did she get untied maybe add a quick cut scene where she is undoing the rope etc while there talking

 

[Freshreel]

Looks ok only thing how did she get untied maybe add a quick cut scene where she is undoing the rope etc while there talking

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Thank you. She dragged the blade over with her foot and then you see her sliding down her chair. It's so you aren't sure whether she managed it or not, for the suspense when he comes to sit down with the gun.

 

[Airsoft-Ed]

Ahhh Kebab World, I recognise that pizza box anywhere

Bitch is a badass though! Hard to believe she just walks out on the end nomming on pizza after just shooting someone in the face and seeing someone else getting shot in the face...

I'd probably be vomming all over the place and balling my eyes out lol.